River (part ix)

Brisbane river

[two fragments]


a human being, is nearly all water:
this might explain why I feel so alive
when you slam your body into mine


you are all boom & rush
while every other living thing
loosens its grip and slips away


Filed under poetry

6 responses to “River (part ix)

  1. misswoodhouse

    This is super. Love the contrast between that particular body and every other living thing, slipping.

  2. beautiful..
    first time here… looking forward to new posts πŸ™‚

  3. uhuuu…super hot that first one…smiles

  4. Another fine addition to the series.

  5. I agree, another wonderful part of the piece. The clash of bodies is great, Graham

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