River (part v)

Brisbane River City Reflection

[three fragments]


it was like this before speech
a sliding body that sounds
like silk


voices of the drowned
rise so whitely
they salt our throat


the ruined parts of yourself
wear the city’s wake like a scar


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3 responses to “River (part v)

  1. I dove in (dived?… whatever!! 😉 ) and followed the long meandering trails of water…Each with a temperament, or character of their own.. So many bends and loops, but I made it… and enjoyed your vivid descriptions of each… and fully enjoyed my visit too… x

  2. You conjurer up such haunting images and tones with the poem…the photo adds to it.

  3. Photos of the river in this series are wonderful

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