River (part ii)

brisbane_river_night

[two fragments]

*

waist deep in the darkness
you believe in
the body drifts further away

*

the moon sinks
with a sloosh and a hiss:
I am willing to follow

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3 responses to “River (part ii)

  1. Oh that opening line…really what quite fantastic…really like this series.

  2. wooow. Such a treat to find Anotherlostshark between all the pragmatics of dealing with emails. Thanks for this, Graham. Can feel the dark drawing one in… but there are lights also…

  3. oh i am willing to follow as well..and oh…waist deep in the darkness…what a wonderful opening…

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