the pier
in a cloud of flies
rotting fish heads

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  1. Oooh. On the nose. I can really relate to the pier though. I’ve been wetting a line a bit lately G and keep coming home to hand waving and screwed up faces.

  2. you hit the bull’s eye with this..can smell it and hear the humming of the flies…

  3. Verse really provides a strong sensory experience.

  4. I can smell those rotting heads – haha

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