Vancouver Haiku #1

crisp sky
girls’ skirts swimming
up past their knees

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long grass
the dog’s paws
wave at the sky

*

lost in a gust
of maple leaves
crow call

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4 responses to “Vancouver Haiku #1

  1. Enjoyed this haiku…particularly like the second one for the visual image it created for me.

  2. lovely!… love the second – reminds me of my own Angus Wee Beastie who loves a good roll in the summery grass

  3. The great thing about your being in N. America is that I don’t have to wait until the next day for posts–I see them as they show up! Love these images.

  4. Gorgeous, again. Re. girls’ skirts – I just noticed the same thing in Adelaide! I was rugged up for Mt Everest, and they were hitching up their skirts!

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