Morning Ritual

morning ritual
gargling in tune
with the crows

 

learning tai-chi
the cormorant holds his position
                                     longer

 

leaning further
into morning
old poinciana

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6 responses to “Morning Ritual

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  2. bruce dorlova

    “learning tai-chi
    the cormorant holds his position
    longer”

    what a fantastic hook to hang all this on.

    the rhythm is superb. fine, fine writing, gnunn.

  3. yes, that is a great closer in the cormorant one

  4. I wish I could lean further into morning!

    Such a rich seam in the day.. well mined!
    and yes.. can’t help but smile
    at the way you’ve caught/wrought the cormorant.

    A.Joy

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